Tuesday, November 16, 2010

Just thoughts..

I find myself whispering a lie to my ear,
Inhaling the thoughts like it's truth so dear,
Why keep breaking the promises,
And being so upset when theirs start to break,
Why is mine acceptable when theirs' so fragile,
Why do I not choke when I swallow,
When theirs just shallow,
Who am I to think I'm better,
When I'm the lowest I can list..

2 comments:

Hope said...

really enjoyed this one. deep, heartfelt and so true. I often think the same way. you seem to me like a very old soul.

thank you for your post

thank you for your visit to my blog and your very kind comment on my poem. your words melted my heart and uplifted my soul. you are too kind

thank you

take care

Carrie Burtt said...

This is truly a beautiful poem...full of the questions we should all ask ourselves....you are a true poet Hailey! :-)
(Love the photo to)